Critique of slab serif

Mads Davidsen
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Hi!
I am currently sketching a hand-lettering piece with this word, which means Egypt. I was hoping that anyone had some constructive criticism. I am already aware that the joints of the N are too thick. Thanks!
—Mads
—Mads

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Pay attention to counter space. The G, for example, is too wide.
Did you try a serif at the top of the first letter?0 -
@Craig Eliason
Thanks! I thought about adding a serif to the Æ, but I didn’t like it.0 -
I like the "Y".2
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Yes Y looks exotic .0
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