Critique of slab serif

Mads Davidsen

Hi!

I am currently sketching a hand-lettering piece with this word, which means Egypt. I was hoping that anyone had some constructive criticism. I am already aware that the joints of the N are too thick. Thanks!

—Mads

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Craig Eliason

Pay attention to counter space. The G, for example, is too wide. 
Did you try a serif at the top of the first letter?

Mads Davidsen

@Craig Eliason
Thanks! I thought about adding a serif to the Æ, but I didn’t like it.

Hrant H. Papazian

I like the "Y".

Aleme Tadesse

Yes Y looks exotic .

Mads Davidsen

@Hrant H. Papazian”
@Aleme Tadesse
Thank you