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Critique of slab serif
Mads Davidsen
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42
October 2017
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Lettering Critiques
Hi!
I am currently sketching a hand-lettering piece with this word, which means Egypt. I was hoping that anyone had some constructive criticism. I am already aware that the joints of the N are too thick. Thanks!
—Mads
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slab serif
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Craig Eliason
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1,250
October 2017
Pay attention to counter space. The G, for example, is too wide.
Did you try a serif at the top of the first letter?
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Mads Davidsen
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October 2017
@Craig Eliason
Thanks! I thought about adding a serif to the Æ, but I didn’t like it.
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Hrant Հրանդ Փափազեան Papazian
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October 2017
I like the "Y".
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Aleme Tadesse
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November 2017
Yes Y looks exotic .
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Mads Davidsen
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November 2017
@Hrant
H. Papazian”
@Aleme Tadesse
Thank you
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Did you try a serif at the top of the first letter?
Thanks! I thought about adding a serif to the Æ, but I didn’t like it.
@Aleme Tadesse
Thank you