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Re: One story a for æ
You could (a) make /a/ more asymmetrical/cursive, (b) draw the stem or add a small serif at the top of /a/, and/or (c) flatten the left side of /e/s bowl so that /e/ appears to join /a/ and not the o…1 -
Re: Janueri (working name) critique
The lowercase is looking great. The serifs could be pushed up a bit more (+2?). I'd restore /e to the first version which hadn't a widening crossbar. Looks better IMO. The uppercase doesn't convince …1 -
Re: Janueri (working name) critique
The width of /b, /d, /p, /q is now just as it should be. I also like /g's new ear much better. I still think it needs a bit more weight around the eye, though. The thinner diagonal of /k needs to gai…1 -
Re: Janueri (working name) critique
Yes, and /g looks meager overall. Specially its neck is too thin.1 -
Re: Janueri (working name) critique
"about the cuts in capitals. Not sure what to do" One reason the cuts on /D or /B may not be working is that the tapering caused by the cut is as thin as the base of the bowl, causing what …1
