Hey. So i'm designing my new "personal" logo. I have my "Sendoushi" but as time goes by I think I rather have a personal website with what I do be it programming, something creative and that is what
https://joesantos.io is. Anyway... here is what I designed, I feel something is off.
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@Joel Santos your design has the charm of a signature but it is illegible, which is certainly not good for a logotype. I suggest you correct the illegible letters (you can get an idea of what I mean from my crude drawing bellow)
I did tried to composite. I've created like 20 versions of the whole. I've did the whole because once again I don't want to miss the feeling of the whole.
That said, I don't think that is the direction I want to take @Nick Cooke . I do want the rigidness I was getting but there is definitely something I'll take from your version. Specially the /o and /n maybe /t aswell. I'll try to do a hybrid and soften my version. Super thanks!
Yes. It is indeed very close. I think I could try to curve the S in the middle a bit more. There is definitely space for that.