Brazen Black (heavy weight)

Kosal Sen
Kosal Sen Posts: 18
in Type Design Critiques
I'm looking for feedback on the black weight of this typeface I'm designing.
I'm having particular trouble with the caps. Proportionally, it just doesn't seem
"clean", and I'm not sure why. Any kind of feedback is appreciated.

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  • George Thomas
    George Thomas Posts: 657
    Is the font hinted?
  • Kosal Sen
    Kosal Sen Posts: 18
    Not yet.
  • Nick Shinn
    Nick Shinn Posts: 2,286
    edited April 2014
    I woud thin the crossbar of A, sharpen up the nadir of M, thin the centre horizontal of R, and widen Z. Perhaps you could make the structure of the Kk's more complex.

    I also think the bottom of /g should not be oval, but have a left-to-right connecting diagonal.

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