Custom Lettering Critique

Hi everyone,

I’m currently working on a custom lettering project for a logotype ("ADAMO") and I would love to get some critical eyes from this community.

I’m mainly looking for feedback on optical adjustments, letter spacing, and anything else that catches your attention—especially what doesn't work or needs adjustment. Any critiques, micro-adjustment suggestions, or reference points would be greatly appreciated. 

Thank you in advance!