Critique my Wasps's Knees whimsical font :)
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Vasil Stanev
Posts: 785
Hello guys, here's a little something a drew in the last 24 hours for fun
I would like to hear your opinions 
The name is taken from a Douglas Adams book.
PDF attached




The name is taken from a Douglas Adams book.

PDF attached

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KRk legs too heavy. Too much contrast in VW. T too light at the top, maybe e crossbar too. f hood is distracting. r might look too “bent”. Should q top right be more like g’s? $ is too dark. I don’t get the short i and j. Untapered F stem looks out of place.The concave and convex sides mean some strings will lock together (all the lowercase in “Theme Song”) but some will do the opposite (middle of “Full”).0
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Fun!
I would love to see more weight in the thick part of the round bowls of P and R, and (although not so much) on the sides of O and Q.
I think slightly longer ascenders/descenders might be nice.0
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