Critique my Wasps's Knees whimsical font :)

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Vasil Stanev
Vasil Stanev Posts: 785
in Type Design Critiques
Hello guys, here's a little something a drew in the last 24 hours for fun :) I would like to hear your opinions :)
The name is taken from a Douglas Adams book. :)
PDF attached

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  • Craig Eliason
    Craig Eliason Posts: 1,470
    edited June 2024
    KRk legs too heavy. Too much contrast in VW. T too light at the top, maybe e crossbar too. f hood is distracting. r might look too “bent”. Should q top right be more like g’s? $ is too dark. I don’t get the short i and j. Untapered F stem looks out of place. 
    The concave and convex sides mean some strings will lock together (all the lowercase in “Theme Song”) but some will do the opposite (middle of “Full”). 
  • Thomas Phinney
    Thomas Phinney Posts: 3,035
    edited June 2024
    Fun!

    I would love to see more weight in the thick part of the round bowls of P and R, and (although not so much) on the sides of O and Q.

    I think slightly longer ascenders/descenders might be nice.

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