Slow Learner Needs More Advice

Hello! I've been working on this font for many, many years, and I just can't finish it. I can appreciate beauty and grace, but actually creating it is something very different. (If only art were as easy as music and language!) Anyway, here's where my antiqua is:


There's something simply wrong with them, and I just can't figure it out. I want to match the italic /h glyphs to the /a glyphs, but I'm worried that'd make the italic too monotonous. Are both /T too narrow? Should I make the italics more pointy? Is roman /Z too wide and /H too narrow? Should the italic caps have more italic shapes? Et cetera ad infinitum ad nauseam. Overall, it seems to me that I'm trying to match several designs, and they just aren't harmonizing. Am I right in thinking that italic /a has too wide of a bowl at the NW corner (the angle is too wide), and glyphs formed on its model just repeat that? Ugh.

Comments

  • You're at a point where questions like "Is roman /Z too wide and /H too narrow?" no longer have an objective answer. It is up to you, and that's a choice you should feel confident in making, because the choices you've made so far are elegant.
  • K PeaseK Pease Posts: 167
    As far as I can tell, your roman is done; it looks perfectly good. If understand you correctly, you're perceiving a mismatch between the steep bowl-to-stem join of /a/b/d/p/q and the shallow bowl-to-stem join of /h/m/n/u/y in the italics. I do not think you should make them the same, as differentiation is important and you don't want to create a dazzle that cuts against the flow of reading, but I think they may harmonize if you made the latter group a bit more narrow.
    Give italic /r some room in its right sidebearing! I don't see the other problems you describe, it's all very nice. I think the consistent overall slight narrowness of the roman capitals is a good choice and need not be tinkered with.
  • Just for gits and shiggles, I'm experimenting with a redesigned italic /n -- the join is lower on the stem, being more consistent with /a, which I've also reworked (probably too much). Old on left, new on right.


  • Michael,
    the thin parts of the a’s are too thick, seen next to your n. The decision about weather to choose the deep or the high offspring (n) needs to get judged by watching text bits. Either some real text or some nonsense like this  may do:
    handanna mennodunga and homminunto umpa annedonna comenonna none humbanango
    Annalena Karenina Donaldino Trumphatore Emengilda Adriana Gelantina Onno Eminento
  • edited August 17
    IMHO, making a classic serif typeface has a lot to do with comparing your own efforts with successful examples of the same genre. (I guess this applies to other genres as well.) So I use a file like the one I am attaching. This is a simple InDesign file that consists in two text boxes: in the first one I put my work-in-progress type and, in the other one, some other type that I consider superb. I am very careful of using the same visual x-height for both samples (that is the reason behind the two letters at the top left, so I can equalize both “x” closely). For this test I use Kern King, but the text is not so important at this moment – what I am looking for, line by line, is for those little hidden details that makes the other typeface looks great and mine plain wrong. Of course, then I compare it with some other similar types, so I can get a better understanding of what is happening with my not-so-great design. I think your work is nice overall, but this might help you to refine it.
  • Thanks, guys!
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