It seems I'm utilizing the "Lettering Critique" category fairly often! I'm back at it again drawing a yet another logotype. The homie @Matthew Smith
gave me some great feedback yesterday and I believe it's in a better point to share with all of you. I'm getting stuck with the very italic round forms in the word "Mondays". The spacing is rather tricky around the "A-Y-S" as well... Would love some extra eyeballs and thoughts on this to tidy everything up.
Thanks as always for the constant thoughts and feedback