Hello all,
I've been working on this monospaced project on and off for a few months now, and have reached a stage where I'd really appreciate some feedback.
I'm new on here, so a little about my type background. I have no formal type education, but have been enjoying trying to figure some stuff out for myself over the past 4 or 5 years – this year I self-released a couple of typefaces.
This is my first attempt at a monospaced typeface, and my intention was to produce an amiable grotesque without worrying too much about it being exquisitely legible or functional at tiny sizes. I'm mostly happy now with the majority of the forms, but I know there's still plenty of work to do to get the text colour looking good – I've just been looking at it way too long now to see it properly. I've designed light and bold weights, with the image below showing an interpolated regular weight. I'm looking for any feedback or advice on offer, especially regarding text colour problems. I've attached a pdf proof with some text setting.
Thanks in advance!
Comments
Some small things:
The ligatures with connecting horizontal strokes (t_i, f_f) stick out quite a bit. I would disable them for text.
The horizontal bar of the t is quite long. The cute loop fills up the space already so you don't need it.
The two 4s are quite different in style and angle. Pick one shape for both?
Yeah, those t_i & f_f ligatures are pretty silly – amusing for me but definitely not great for text.
I made the decision to have different styles for the 4s ages ago, and I can't quite remember the reason. I've definitely seen other typefaces using those two different forms at once for lining and old stye figures so I guessed it was a typographically legitimate move. I'll have another look at using the same style for both.
Thank you! I like it too but I'm a little worried that it's too squiggly for the typeface.
The only thing that bothers me at first sight is the very tight aperture of the /a and the out-of-character construction in /G. I agree with Craig that /R and /P would profit from larger counters.
The /W and /w might look too dark at smaller sizes. Perhaps with a half-height middle element (like /M) they would look lighter.
You should use “co”.
I just want to say, while receiving (and using!) feedback is great, don’t forget to use your own sense of the typeface’s concept and what you want to do with it — not every monospaced has to work great for code, for example. There’s enough boring typefaces out there already
@Georg Seifert: I shortened the bar of /t a little bit, any more and it was looking to me like it was falling over backwards – but maybe I'm just too used to seeing it with a long bar. I've tried matching the old style 4 to the lining 4, and I think it's an improvement.
@Craig Eliason: I've ditched the notched joins on the humped letters to match the bowl joins and I think it looks better now – I'm just worried about /m and /n losing definition at smaller sizes.
The serifs on /J and /j I've cropped slightly, but I quite like them being oversized here, and I'm not sure it hinders function. /g is a little lighter now and looks better I think. I agree about the /l (lower 'el'); I've tried to push the stem towards the center a bit more. The /P and /R I wanted to draw rather high-waisted, but yeah I think it was a little too exaggerated.
@Christian Thalmann: I'm glad you like it! I've tinkered a little with the /a to try and open that aperture out a bit, but I'm finding it difficult to do without changing the letter's character too much. The construction of the /G I just can't decide on; this one isn't ideal but I definitely prefer it in this case to more natural options – do you really think it doesn't fit the rest of the typeface?
@Samuil Simonov: To be honest, I probably wouldn't want to alter the design too much for the sake of legible coding, although of course it would be great if it could be useful for that too. I set that snippet, though – let me know what you think. Also, I took your advice on lowering the /W and /w central elements, which I think is an improvement.
@Stephen Coles — I realised I'd forgotten to adapt the /u and /y in-line with the changes I've been making to the joins on /h, /n, /m and /r. The connection is not so high now, but still a little heavy maybe.
The top /a still feels a bit cramped to me. I think it's less the aperture itself (the /e has a tight aperture as well, and it looks great to me) and more the disbalance between the upper and lower enclosed area. Perhaps try lowering the middle a bit to approach a 1:1 distribution of the area in the two counters? It might also help the /a harmonize with the /e better.