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Re: Renwick Display - A Humanist Sans
Everything that Craig said, plus: Spacing needs work. The i has too much space, see how the o is off-center in adhesion. The t has too much space, especially on the right. Your caps seem quite dark c…2 -
Re: Looking for advice on improving my eye
It's hard to say what is 'just not working' when imperfections are your goal. I actually think this could be a decent starting point for something quirky, but it's hard to pinpoin…4 -
Re: Renwick Display - A Humanist Sans
Yes, my feedback was geared towards text sizes. Currently the design is giving me much more text vibes than display vibes, but of course you can change that. I would say it needs a little more charac…3 -
Re: Renwick Display - A Humanist Sans
I like the vibe! Spacing is still quite tight. Compare side-to-side with a typeface you like and you'll most likely see the difference. In music production, it's very normal to use a refere…3 -
Re: Critique request: Clearly
S and s are leaning backwards. The whole thing is a bit quirky though, so maybe that's fine. I feel the same way about the angle of the cutoff in q.2
