Hello there, I’ve been working in this non commercial project, and I would like some feedback. Never drew a lettering before, and there is a lot going on. I like the slanted O but, I got the feeling it is standing out somehow. Maybe should I go to something like uncial script type. But, as I imaging this as a beer branding, it would be to cliché I guess. Also not sure about curves in general. I really want to keep the condensed part, but not sure if it treated the same way on each letter.
I am looking to hear you, thanks a lot! Please be harsh.