I think this is my rite-of-passage grotesque sans. I started it on a holiday; I discovered that in one of Australia's iconic surf locations, the design aesthetic had moved away from rough graffiti-like lettering I expected and towards a more precise, squarish regular monoline. So I tried drawing one; the expected use would be for display, ideally at large sizes.

I started with a squirclar /o, offset a bunch of open paths, and went from there. Because it's basically an offset monoline (I have made the bold a bit more contrasty), I felt a bit comfortable trying a range of weights. More in the attached PDFs. Numbers are sucking but I'm not sure why, but I think I'm more or less happy with everything else.

Any comments gratefully received - thanks!


  • Although I like the look of them, the long descenders aren't that suitable for a display face. Perhaps offer them as alternates?
  • Chris DrabschChris Drabsch Posts: 38
    edited September 2016
    You're off to a good start, and being an Australian I like the name alot! It does have that beachy feel to it.

    The only awkwardness I'm feeling is to do with the height of the double stories in the /g/ and the /y/, the descenders currently look too long and gangly. I would try to pull them up so these letterforms are more compact - a bit like the /g/ in the slab serif at the bottom of this image:

    I would also try to bring a bit of individual character to each letterform more. I see you've started off with the squircle which is a nice shape in itself, but it does look very  dominant throughout the text. But I'm sure in time you'll find the voice within the design and start bringing in more idiosyncrasies / personality traits to each letter.

  • Christian ThalmannChristian Thalmann Posts: 798
    edited September 2016
    Could /m/w be a bit narrower? And the /u, to a lesser degree?

    Also, it looks like the counters of /a/e are less balanced in the Bold than in the Regular, especially the /e. Try moving the crossbar up a bit.

    I agree that the descenders are too deep.
  • The descenders are too deep, as other are saying. I honk you will need to bring in some stroke modulation. The mono-linearity in the /a and the /n, for instance, leaves you with letterforms looking much too awkward. The terminals on /a, /c, /g, and /t, for instance, are all different. There seems to be no system present. 
  • Simon CozensSimon Cozens Posts: 182
    edited September 2016
    OK, getting the point about the descenders! I will try adding more contrast and changing the /a/e.

    I thought I had a system to the terminals, and I thought maybe I was being too rigid! Maybe it's not an appropriate idea, but there was an idea to the construction:

    So in my mind the only one that doesn't fit is /a, because it looked weird when I applied it.
  • That theoretical justification doesn't come through, because for example on your /c/, I don't interpret those terminals as aligning with vectors coming from the letter's center--I just see them as cut perpendicular to the stroke direction when it ends. Thus it seems like a mismatch for the vertical end of /t/'s bottom which isn't similarly perpendicular. 
  • Rotate the 'c' by 180 degree and you have a starting point for the descender of the 'g'.
  • Nice one Georg :)

    I'm also reminded of how typefaces like Eurostile treat the descender of /g/, it's almost a quarter the height of the bowl:

  • Thanks all for comments so far - latest efforts:

  • Straight descenders need to be reined in too! (And ascenders)
  • Thierry BlancpainThierry Blancpain Posts: 149
    edited September 2016
    I don’t see a clear concept as to where you want to go with the typeface overall yet. Definitely needs a lot more work clarifying your goals.

    Why is the o such more narrow than a, e, s? The curve quality looks pretty bad in a lot of places, too: the middle section of the /s seems to not even try to cleanly merge into the curves below and above, the bottom left curve of /t is weirdly shaped, etc.

    You overall don’t seem to have decided what kind of curves you want your typeface to have. I for example don’t see much of a connection between the bottom of the g and the /o design that the top uses. Same goes for the /a, too. And I would never start with so many characters /weights before you have even a few uppercase letter to clarify the overall structure of the typeface. Try to clarify your design intentions in one weight, with both upper- and lowercase characters, and only once you’re clear on that, expand to more characters and weights.

    Sorry if this seems harsh, but I think as of yet this is not anywhere near a design that should be released. Keep working!
  • Christian ThalmannChristian Thalmann Posts: 798
    edited September 2016
    Rhythm has improved a bit, though I think there's still room for further improvement. For instance, aren't /a and /e rather wide? I also feel the different letters don't quite agree on how rounded or square the typeface wants to be.

    Up close, your curves are often very wobbly; they will need more work.

  • The 'a' is too wide overall. 

    The 'g' and 'y' descenders seem shorter, but the ascenders and 'p' descenders are still very long. 

    Tip of t is a little bit too short. 

    Tittles are too small. 

    '9' is too stiff in the spine. 
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