So I worked on this ampersand incorporating PP like around last year sometime and left it at that. Here's the link to 1 &2
Looking at it now, I noticed it had a few issues and addressed it. However, I'm still kinda not convinced, something still looks off and I can't put a finger to it between the two versions.. Which of the two is better? or are they both bad, if so what are the obvious issues if any?